Nursery Rhymes revisited...

OK, I know I've said it before, I this is my last revised nursery rhyme (for a while at least).

Revised Nursery Rhyme
(This is my garden)

This is my garden
I’ll rake it with care
And then some flower seeds I’ll plant
The sun will shine
The rain will fall
And my garden will blossom
And grow straight and tall

(Mine)

This is my garden
All covered with weeds
The dog’s dug a hole by that plant
The rain comes down
The plant will fall
But the weeds in my garden
Still grow straight and tall